chris\'s life

name:chris

gender:male

age:14

homeworld:the world that never was

weakness:seeing his nobody friends get hurt injures his nobody spirit so it makes him immobilized for a while

weapons:heaven and earth spear,elder nobody blade

apperance:wears organization XII cloak and if able to see his hair its a light brown color

species:half nobody,half human

fighting style:hes a free styler theres no predicting what his next move is

history:when chris was born his parents cared about him thats why they made him flee from his real home world and they left him a weapon called the heaven and earth spear for when he grew up so he could protect himself.chris was 10 when he found his nobody friends. the only forms of life were him and the nobodies.The nobodies loved to play and to train with chris,they were like family to chris so they turned him into a half nobody half human he left for a while on a training misson when he found out a twilight thorn was attacking his home world he searched for the elder nobody blade.When he found it he summoned the elder nobody to help him destroy the twilight thorn they finally demolished the twilight thorn that was destroying his world...he then went exploring searching for more power he stumbles across destany islands and he became friends with sora and his gang,chris decided to lend sora his heaven and earth.He then joined organization XII and stumbled across sora again but he didnt remember sora because marluxia was controlling his heart while chris was fighting sora, his nobody inside him was fighting marluxias controll then he was free.He went back to the islands with sora and his gang and since his nobody friends were to weak to take on another twilight thorn he found a cave and him and his nobodies lived with each other but then his mind went back to the first time he came to the islands when soras dark side attacked he was worried he had a dark side to he then went to elder nobody for advice.The elder said"chris...you have a nobody heart...and a nobody soul...if you had a dark side like soras...that nobody will destroy it...and when im gone... you will take my throne...because i trust you chris",chris wasnt worried anymore ... But chris was still confused what was his purpose in life?who were his real parents?are his real parents still alive?

race:human/nobody

affinities:can destroy anything possible if needed...and if his nobody friends are being hurt while its his weakness it make him go balistik and destroys every thing in his path

personality:brave and easy going and he must make a mess of things wherever he goes.

Copy this then paste it into your post (then just fill it out by deleting the little help hints and adding what your character has and does)

Name: (What is your characters name?)

Age: (How old is your character? How old do you think they are/should be?)

Gender: (Are they male or female?)

Home World: (Where does your character originate?)

Race/Species: (What kind of being is your character? Heartless? Nobody? Human? Moogle? Half-Wolf? Demon?(If you make a nobody or heartless, check the character database for an announcement concerning them))

Appearance: (What does your character look like? What do they wear?)

Personality: (How does your character act?)

Weapons: (What weapons does your character use to fight?)

Fighting Style: (How does your character like to fight?)

Affinities: (What is your character good at? What general skills and abilities do they have?)

Weaknesses: (What is your character poor at? What general things do your character not work well with? What are their flaws?)

History: (What has your character done? What do they plan to do? What are their ambitions? What do they want in life?)

Pictures: (Any images of your character that you might have go here, they are optional)

i dunno how to get the pictures

Draw and scan.

nuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!!!!!!!! i suck at drawing

you don't need a picture

k good so is it approved?

you still need, Race/Species, Personality, and Affinities.

now is it approved i mean god dammit my fingers are hurting from typing

Try not to curse
Pick one HOME world. Where you were born, not where you go.
don't put your summons in your application
make a real fighting style, not that you can summon the nobodies which you can't really do so
take off your specialties, we don't need them here
Your history was also vary confusing. Make it flow in chronological order instead of jumping around. Make a story to what happened when you were born, then lead that to when you were 10 then lead that to where you are now.

srry o and

is this a little better?

you have to put a weakness on here, just no one will know them unless you show that you are weakened by that event

You still don't have your history in Chronological order.
You have you being friends with Sora and his gang in Oblivion Castle, then you have your character help him attack his Darkside (even though this should be a battle he has to face alone) which happened before Oblivion Castle

is this a LITTLE better?? cuz my poor fingers are tired

ooo it does.... wow and all this time i went by the way it happens in my game chain of memories ...

alright then, fine.
Your history still liked to jump a lot but I will just let you have it. Make sure you make your weapons in the Weapons creation areas then your skills if you should want any.

srry i had to fix the name

wait i fixed stuff on the first page

approved

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finally!

Just be aware that if we get a "Tidus" you will have to find a new pic